My favourite Ice-cream

My favourite ice-cream is mango. It tastes and smells like real mango. It's delicious.
                                                     by Sione 

Trip To The Ice Cream Farm

Learning goal: I am learning to write a recount.
Success criteria: I can do this when I

• write my ideas in order
• use describing words
• use lining words
• 
  

In the holidays my family and I went to the ice-cream farm. I ate mango ice-cream. It was my favourite ice cream. It was yummy. It was sticky. My ice cream was melting because it was a hot day. We had a great time.
                                           By Sione

Writing Sentences

I am learning to write sentences about King Pig
The king Pig was mean to the sheep. The King Pig was yelling at the sheep. The king Pig took off all the sheep's wool. The King Pig did not show respect to the sheep.
                                                   by Sione

The King Lion

The part of the story that I liked the best was when the monkey laughed at the King Lion. I liked it because the monkey was not scared of the King Lion.
                                                       By Sione
                                                      

Fireworks

I am learning to write about the part of the story that I like the best.

The part of the story that I liked the best was when the girl and her granny watched the fireworks. I liked it because it said Happy Birthday.
                                                   By Sione

Ice Cream Farm

In the holidays my family and I went to the ice-cream farm. I ate mango ice-cream. It was my favourite ice cream. It was yummy. My ice cream was melting because it was a hot day. We had a great time.
                                           By Sione

Family Time

Learning goal: I am learning to write a recount.

In the weekend I went to Rainbows End with my family. I went on the ride. I went on the roller coaster with my mum and dad. It was fun.
                                              By Sione

Trip To The Beach

Learning goal: I am learning to write a recount. 
Success criteria: I can do this when I

• write my ideas in order
• use linking words

My family and I went to the beach. We played in the sand. We made sand castles. I went for a swim. It was hot. Mum bought us ice-cream.

                                                    By Sione