Trip To The Ice Cream Farm

Learning goal: I am learning to write a recount.
Success criteria: I can do this when I

• write my ideas in order
• use describing words
• use lining words
• 
  

In the holidays my family and I went to the ice-cream farm. I ate mango ice-cream. It was my favourite ice cream. It was yummy. It was sticky. My ice cream was melting because it was a hot day. We had a great time.
                                           By Sione